Score: 7

"Shows promise!"

submission: The Cheese Stands Alone

date: September 28, 2008

I viewed the trailer and was interested enough to check the website. The character bios are decent and I've always had a soft spot for rougher animation. The web-comics could use a little organization, but I understand it's all a work in progress. I'd like to see more of the story. Keep at it.

Score: 2

"Ugh."

submission: Helicopter BETA

date: April 27, 2008

Hor-hor-horreeeah-di-hor-dibbuhdibbuh -hor-hor-hor-di-horeaaaaaAHHHHHHHH ENOUGH!

What was the point of dodging the obstacles if all you had to do was stay up? Don't think that slapping "BETA" on a turd makes it passable.

Score: 7

"A step in the right direction."

submission: Subject 42

date: April 8, 2008

Most of the objects were drawn well and there was a good use of audio. I'm also glad that you utilized several different camera angles to tell your story, rather than a "side-scrolling" animation. I like its silent style, but you could try working with dialogue in your next project in order to flesh out the story. Keep in mind that practice makes perfect.